MESSAGE FOR KRIS Kris – I have to be honest here and say that you are about to get almost exactly the same feedback I’ve just given to Erik! The only difference will be that you have used more types of technology, but that doesn’t mean to say you can’t push yourself to use more. And just because you have been ill at home does not mean you can’t blog! So….. Alarm! No posts for over a week! 10 days to be exact! To be fair I guess you are in the process of posting the pitch to the blog – but don’t let the grass grow under your feet. You have a lot going for you – you have a great artist image sorted, locations will look good and the synergy ideas are strong too. BUT if you don’t keep up with your blogging you are losing marks for the coursework blog! We would have expected over 30 posts by now at least – so get on the case Kris. Now, re: this smoking idea – just be aware that smoking will restrict the target audience – it won’t get shown to certain audiences for H&S reasons so you’ll have to address this on the blog. You also need to do another post about your target audience – you have the social media on 3rd October but you can refine it now your planning has developed. Another post that you could use to really show off your skills of analysis AND develop your uses of technology at the same time is ‘examine the website’ post. So: 1) consider TA again, 2) keep up with posts 3) do EXTRA BLOGGING (especially because you are good at it). You want to be aiming for level 4 Kris and it should easily be in your grasp. Get back on track now!!!!
MESSAGE FOR KRIS
ReplyDeleteKris – I have to be honest here and say that you are about to get almost exactly the same feedback I’ve just given to Erik! The only difference will be that you have used more types of technology, but that doesn’t mean to say you can’t push yourself to use more. And just because you have been ill at home does not mean you can’t blog! So…..
Alarm! No posts for over a week! 10 days to be exact! To be fair I guess you are in the process of posting the pitch to the blog – but don’t let the grass grow under your feet. You have a lot going for you – you have a great artist image sorted, locations will look good and the synergy ideas are strong too. BUT if you don’t keep up with your blogging you are losing marks for the coursework blog! We would have expected over 30 posts by now at least – so get on the case Kris.
Now, re: this smoking idea – just be aware that smoking will restrict the target audience – it won’t get shown to certain audiences for H&S reasons so you’ll have to address this on the blog. You also need to do another post about your target audience – you have the social media on 3rd October but you can refine it now your planning has developed. Another post that you could use to really show off your skills of analysis AND develop your uses of technology at the same time is ‘examine the website’ post.
So: 1) consider TA again, 2) keep up with posts 3) do EXTRA BLOGGING (especially because you are good at it). You want to be aiming for level 4 Kris and it should easily be in your grasp. Get back on track now!!!!